Week 6 - Introduction

 These days, every songs is evaluated by inquiry commission before they are played by mass media, and some violent or explicit lyrics are censored and prohibited so they cannot be played by mass media. Government claims that government secures the ethicality and public character through this kind of censorship. At this point, many debates deal with this topic because musicians argue that their freedom of expressions must be ensured. However, we should be aware that this censorship is unnecessary. Government should not censor all music with violent or explicit lyrics. There are reasons why I think that music censorship is unnecessary.

1. Attention grabber
I attracted the audience by describing the situation that every music is censored by government.

2. Explains the topic
In the attention grabber I introduce the topic and opposite standpoint against the topic.

3. My thesis
My topic is that government should not censor all music with violent or explicit lyrics. I think it is clear to describe the reasons for this.