Week 12 - Feedback

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

2) What did you do well?

 I choose the unique topic, and i came up with great ideas.
 

3) What could you have done better? 

 I can add more evidence and details that will support my thesis.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

 I think my narration part is the best. I suggest the brief knowledge about my topic to audience, and brought the problem up. 

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

 I think my concession part is most poor. Actually, it is based on opinions almost entirely.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? 

I will suggest examples about how the past Korean government used music censorship for political rationalization.